The girl got the little pot from the old man. The little pot is magic pot, and the girl and her mother cast a spell on the pot. Then the mother raise a problem, and they have a good time everyday.
I hadn't read such a story, so I was able to read it happily. I thought that kind to the person is very good by this story, and oneself can become happy, too. This story was very interesting by me. I though that I want the magic porridge pot.
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Hikari, I'm happy that you are doing a book review, but I think that you have copied the book rather than writing your own summary. I'll talk about this in class, so I may ask you to come up and do some writing.
Hi Light,
Did Mr. T. talk with you about this after class? Did he show you the course poster, and remind you that we don't allow copying in assignments for Writing III-IV?
Even if he did, you should carefully study the book review guidelines section and cross-linked resources on the Writing Studio Wiki (§1.4, ff.). I began updating them yesterday. If you have any questions about them:
a. Ask in a follow-up comment here;
b. Ask in a comment on a book review related post on the Writing Studio Blog; of
c. Ask Mr. T. at the computer center, or me in class.
Cheers.
Thanks for rewriting your book review!
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